My dj system for my birthday day!!

My dj system for my birthday day!!

Thursday, April 28, 2011

Seeking fun in a short life

"Doctor we need immediate help!" Shouted the old nurse.
His heart was slowing down,  breaths were getting smaller and smaller. His skin was very pale and looked almost like a zombie. Angelica looked at Jonathan in a scared look. "Do something!" She shouted at Jonathan with tears in her eyes.
He just stood their emotion and motion less. Soon Chris was being  escorted to the emergency room where he was taken into surgery. His state was very serious but he got out alive. "Chris, I am very sorry to say but, you only have two weeks to live." The doctor stated.
Angelica and Jonathan had just changed their grins to mad faces. All they could do is think to themselves is how unfair life is by giving this child such a horrible disease and making him squeeze his life into these short 14 days. Chris just lay their thinking. He called over his friends and said he wanted to have the best time on earth these 14 days he has left to live. "That is an awesome idea!" Angelica shouted quietly.
The next day, Angelica's mother picked up Jonathan and Chris from the hospital. They all knew Chris loved riding dirtbikes and atvs. Before he had been diagnosed, he had attended every single race in the 250cc category. He even raced on amateur tracks himself. "Here we are!" Shouted Angelica's mother.
Chris's eyes gleamed with eternal happiness and anyone who looked at him cold tell he knew what was going to happen. It was a huge stadium with the name "FX*Freestyle*FX". As soon as you got out of the car you could here the dirtbike engines roaring and smell the fumes of a two stroke engine. "So what do  you think ?" The mom asked Chris. 
"I love it!!" Chris shouted in happiness.
The both of them never saw this happiness in Chris since he had been told he had blood cancer. Chris was first to rush in the mom checked out and while she was, the lady at the counter noticed Chris had cancer. To be sincere she took 50% of their bills. Then the mom announced  that they were staying for two straight weeks. Chris tried to give off a smile but couldn't help feel the horrible pain. He knows too much strain for his body is not good and can really shorten his life span. The lady gave them the keys to their room and they took the elevator. When they arrived by their room, it was very different from the others. It had two doors combined like a castle while all the others had single doors. the mom opened the doors and let out a very big gasp that scared Chris. All three of the children ran and looked at highest grade in rooms in that whole stadium. It consisted of four king size beds, three plasma tv's, four special edition adio dirtbikes and free wifi. "This is even better than my dream house that I drew in my bed!" Chris shouted while regreting it at the same time.
They all got dressed and and went downstairs to go riding right as they were entering the arena, mom's phone rang. "Hello?" The mom anwsered
"Oh, Hello this is Dr. Rushwell from Chris's hospital. We have news about Chris." Doctor replied.
"Good or bad?" The mom asked.
"Well, the scale read Chris's state wrong, he actually has two years to live and will probably breakthrough cancer at that time!" The doctor shouted.
" Oh my GOD!" The mom screamed and told Chris.
The whole group jumped in circles with happiness while the doctor was still on the phone jumping too. Just remember, you can't always trust technology, just follow your heart and you'll surely get where you're heading to.

3 comments:

  1. awwwwww!!! SWEET!!!!!!! >3< lol awsome job >FF<

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  2. Very touching story about the boy that only had two more weeks too live. You really kept the audience in mind. I really don't think many things are touching and sweet. But, when i read this I really thought this was a real story, and I felt bad for this kid Chris.so, very good with that, but make sure to always indent when a new person starts to talk.

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  3. Your post's lenghth was okay. It wasn't too long or too short. I liked the emotion, the dialogue, and the how it turned good for him at the end.

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